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Teen Poetry #5

Love Me

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-09-07 11:15 AM

I know the punctuation is incorrect but I didn't know what to do!!!! LOL!

White paper my crystal pool
Blackens as my ink touches it
Shane it reads a silent greeting
That really means why didn't you call
I got your note during second period
What I was saying is why was it so short
Almost got caught reading it
Which ment I wanted to get caught
Riley said she saw you at the game
Why was he without me
Were you and Shanna having fun
Why was she holding his hand
I thought relationship and commiment were one
What did he think
I guess you thought different
Love me was signed at the bottom
As tears dripped down my face
I held a single fate in my hand

~* Someday, I will conquer it and then I will be free *~

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-09-07 12:56 PM

Hi! I really liked your poem and i hope to read more of your stuff. I really related to it! Keep writing! cause I`ll keep reading.

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