Frank and the Woman (another short poem)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #5

Frank and the Woman (another short poem)

Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

0 posted 2002-09-08 08:02 AM

Frank and the Woman
_____________________

Frank yells abruptly,

"Where's my sandwich, yer woman?!?"

Woman rushes with sandwich...left hand.

Beer........right hand.

Pride...nowhere.

"Demon slain, the deed is done...."

Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

1 posted 2002-09-08 08:06 AM

oh yes it's another one of those short poems

there's a stronger message in this one...i'm sure ur smart enough to get it....and i hope it makes u think even more...

(btw....ppl have been asking me if i'm a girl....nope...i'm a guy...yea i'm against female exploitation...but i'm a guy..)

"Demon slain, the deed is done...."

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2002-09-08 02:13 PM

I liked this. It's a simple poem, but has a message. It sort of reminds me horribly of my grandparents! Well done.
Eleanor

In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.