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Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

0 posted 2001-08-09 02:24 PM

Vanquish the evil from within,
Shadow black Mythrin,
Forgive thy sin.

Thy holy city seized in a storm,
A dark shadow’s plague,
In which we mourn.

Hey,

This is just something I wrote today and I liked it for some reason. Figured I would share it 'what the heck'. Okay that's all thanks for reading

-- Linc

       "Blood Moon"
   Host: Lark.crodo.com
         Port:1313
"Control is a fantasy that only the weak minded belive they have."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 08-09-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-08-09 03:23 PM

Short and sweet. Mythrin was once a wonderful place.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-08-09 03:34 PM

Great description of the corruption that has hit our little world. Great work, thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-08-09 03:50 PM

To:

Allan - Thank you, I really enjoyed your poem Children of Nobility extreamly good as you know bye my reply :-P thanks again.

Erica - Your just saying that *beam* heh thanks for reading *wiggle* Aerostatal will cya soon

           -- Linc

       "Blood Moon"
   Host: Lark.crodo.com
         Port:1313
"Control is a fantasy that only the weak minded belive they have."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 08-09-2001).]

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-09 08:24 PM

Linc.. yay! This is REALLY good. Short, but powerful in it's simplicity. VERY nicely done.

JULI!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

5 posted 2001-08-13 11:41 AM

*sniffs sadly* I miss the good ole daze... great poem buddy.
~Scia

Speak softly and carry a beagle.

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught."
~Edouard Manet

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-08-24 11:07 PM

I really liked this one Linc! Awesome job here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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