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Teen Poetry #5

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Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-04-03 08:51 PM

Everyday,
she goes to school,
with a smile,
upon her face.

A smile so facke,
that not even she,
notices it.

For all it is,
ia a cover.

A cover for,
what she feels.

Feelings of pain,
haterid,
and sadness.

Feelings from,
her life.

A life,
so horrid.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2002-04-05 12:30 PM

Baby_Angel123-
This is such a sad write, but very well done.
I especially like this part...

    "A smile so facke,
    that not even she,
        notices it."

Very powerful lines.
Wonderfully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-10 11:50 AM

I cant believe how much i can relate to this. This is what i did almost every day in 9th grade until my teacher caught on. Wonderful poem..really hit home

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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