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Uninhibited |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
His eyes penetrate My eyes look away He stares uninhibited Blushing I escape. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Short and Sweet, just the way I like them. This is a neat little poem good job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Nice capturing of a moment pulled from time. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, but might you beguile him to try again???? cute poem |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're the one that blushed???  I think that you've made this short form all your own walker. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walker~ How delightfully done. So little - so much~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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