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Open Poetry #15

blonde on black

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-08-02 02:26 AM

blonde on black

I still look at the picture
of you
taken through a mirror

blonde upon black
catches my breath
still

I meet your eyes in but a photograph
still seeing love
how can that be
with everything else I’ve seen
so contrary to it

still
it is love.

[This message has been edited by JLR (edited 08-02-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-08-02 02:29 AM

this almost seems like it could be a song titled "Still"

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-08-02 07:21 AM

Very smitten! Photographs and mirrors hold many secrets! I liked this very much.
Sincerely,
Regina

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-02 08:36 AM

interesting poem... the images somewhat mysterious...

I enjoyed !!!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-08-02 06:47 PM

JLR- if we can only take those cherish moments and make them last forever.We'd be happier. Great love piece.

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

5 posted 2001-08-03 02:06 AM

JLR
I can tell this is heart felt...well done!
Cindi

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