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Open Poetry #15

Lies retold

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

0 posted 2001-08-02 11:10 AM

Pain intruding,
misery excluding.
Damned ta'hell,
love expelled.
Mischeivious lovers,
underneath covers.
Twisted life,
ascending strife.
Hidden disguise,
retold lies.
Caught red-handed,
truth demanded.
Lies retold...

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....i'm outta touch.......-Linkin Park
Don't EVER judge me - Slipknot

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-02 11:23 AM

clever play on sounds and words.. I enjoyed

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-08-02 12:40 PM

Oh, how I despise the forked tongue. Caught red handed and still they lie. Well done.
Sincerely,
Regina

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

3 posted 2001-08-02 03:23 PM

If they're caught red handed, there must be pictures, right?

Shannon

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-08-02 03:26 PM

I hate it when people
try to lie to you and
you know the truth.
Very well written

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-08-02 04:01 PM

Well expressed, one of my biggest pet peeves is anyone who lies or deceives.

Melissa~

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