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Open Poetry #15

Luminescent Lady Luna Tanka

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-08-06 12:23 PM

~*Luminescent Lady Luna*~

In love's hush of night
Luna's laugh tickles starbright
ageless shadows dance
mystic orb smile doth entrance
glowing butter pecan drops

By Melissa P. Monette

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-08-06 12:26 PM

glowing butter pecan drops

What an incredible description...love this!

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

2 posted 2001-08-06 12:48 PM

This is an awsome decription! I love this very much! And now that I know what a Tanka is...Well Done!!!
Cindi

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-06 07:03 PM

like I've said. . . you're just too good at these. . .

great job. . .

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-08-06 07:52 PM

Melissa,
I like. Sy

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-08-06 08:38 PM

Yummy!!!

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-08-25 09:40 PM

missy,
this is way cool,
you'll have to teach
me how to write these

Kay Vibbert
Junior Member

since 2001-08-25

Posts 35
Indiana

7 posted 2001-08-25 11:38 PM

You made me hungry for pecan cookies!

Kay (aka/Irish Rose)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-08-26 04:33 PM

Oh my.....do I love this one...and pecan butter pecan drops......yummy sounds good.

Charisma

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