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Open Poetry #15

Passionate Duo

Rindercella
Member

since 1999-11-12

Posts 64
La La Land

0 posted 2001-08-14 07:18 AM

Undeniable
the hazel of your eyes
when they gaze
at me in passionate
surprise

Unreliable
the hazel of your eyes
when they gaze
at me in passionate
lies

*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

1 posted 2001-08-14 08:35 AM

Oh, The double edged sword strikes hot...Just Great!

Willie

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-14 09:10 AM

nicely done.. i enjoyed

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-08-14 09:38 AM

How this swivels on one word...well done!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-16 05:03 AM

Rindercella~
Very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2001-08-16 07:37 AM

perfect!!

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