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Open Poetry #15

Pondering Passion

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-08-22 11:04 PM

lips locked
lover's lust
trying to take
trying to trust
eyes engulf
every emotion
playfully prolonging
passion's potion

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-22-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-08-22 11:17 PM

SmittenKitten~
Delightfully rendered.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-08-22 11:22 PM

Very sensual...very good! Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-23 08:43 AM

nicely done... in a few words capturing the essence of passion....

I enjoyed!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-08-28 02:47 PM

SmittenKitten-
   Much enjoyed this!
   Nicely penned!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-08-28 03:09 PM

Well done, very sensual.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-08-28 05:14 PM

Nice writing Smitten...James

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