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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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In the glow of the budding dawn Just as the sleeping sun awakes Is this the time my fate is drawn Across a dream as the new day breaks paladin |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this thought.... nicely done... I can see it as part of a bit longer verse..telling a story... hopefully one of happiness..but a story no matter sad or happy.. liked!! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lovely thought to capture the feeling of many who are atuned to their soul at that time of morning. Well said. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paladin, Nicely put, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice indeed Paladin! I just love that time of the morning...  Good stuff!~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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