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Lady In White

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0 posted 2001-07-19 11:52 AM

~*~

sweltering smiles come
through the tune of your sweet drum
chant along with me

~*~

as heat permeates
toe to hip to finger's touch
sweltering smiles come

~*~

chant along with me
feel this our beat through the heat
sundown brings the warm

~*~

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-07-19 11:54 AM

And I'm smiling, well written! I really enjoyed these

Melissa~

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2 posted 2001-07-19 12:01 PM

sounds like nice smiles to me...

nicely written... and a pleasure to read

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with you

3 posted 2001-07-19 12:21 PM

oh I do like these very much

I need ice........

VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-19 01:05 PM

soft sweet snukes, that's smiles once removed

Mishtheelf
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5 posted 2001-07-19 04:02 PM

I get a very sensual feel from these. Quite a powerful 51 syllables.

shadow974
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6 posted 2001-07-19 04:12 PM

Nicely written, I don't think thry're going to need a blanket!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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