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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
Green leaves and yellow blossoms Paint the hillside home of my youth. For years now I have searched these hills For a kernel of life's truth. I see the light of living Flicker and flash in this natural garden -- The compassion, and the beauty of them Make my heart unharden. And after travel far and wide In further quest for absolution, I've learned that I wish to live upon These hills 'till life's conclusion. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hard indeed sometimes to leave the places of our heart... Nicely done |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sounds like a beautiful place to live! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
You have painted the hillsides of your home quite nicely  I enjoyed! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
There can never truly be anyplace like "home"... I can completely relate to the sentiments here. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beautiful image, I can smell those yellow flowers. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a lovely place to be, thanks for letting us see! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I like your rhyming Mish, it doesn't sound forced, which is good. I think.. I think this poem almost sounds cute though. Was it meant to be cute? It's nice Mish, real nice.“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like it yuh ! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Truly beautiful write here! So much enjoyed! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
Ron~ You're not wrong Betty~ It's great, yes. I've moved around a bit, and haven't seen anyplace to rival it yet. Krista~ Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed. Mark~ There's noplace like home *clicks his heels together* Titia~ Thank you for the compliment! I love the dandilions too. VAS~ You're welcome, mon ami! Lynne~ Thanks. I have a hard time with rhyming well in a non-childish way. So yeah, I expected it to sound a bit cute. But I'm working toward a less cute style. LOL You should read some of my older rhymes. They're so cute you'd probably vomit. Walt~ Thanks! Saunni~ Thank you very much. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Heh, ah, I dunno about vomitting, Mish.. I like your poetry, and there ain't nothing wrong with cute sometimes. ^_^ Oh, and you should see MY rhyme, I haven't done a successful one yet.. i wrote things like cat mat hat bat when I was 5, but that's the closest I've ever got. ^_^Love -Lynne “One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
I love your imagery. A place brought to life for others to see. Good job. Shannon |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I love this! Cindi |
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