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Brian Madden's Favourite Poetry Challenge
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Brian Madden's Favourite Poetry Challenge |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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The Challenge Interlopers Favourite Poem by Himself ( or one of them ) clouds forming darkly lightning strikes while thunder rolls rain falling earthward ~*~ trees offer branches welcoming life giving rain nourishment embraced ~*~ leaves spin with the breeze frolicking in aftermath clouds lift and sun shines --------------------------- *My Re-write ( the challenge )* Leaves turn upside down anticipating the rain thus far only clouds life embraces rain lightning offers a quick death trees reach up for both thunder rolls away following after dark clouds sun shines in their wake *my apologies to interloper..lol  There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron [This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 07-21-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nicely done Jamie |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
well,, i tried..lol,, thanks paula There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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