| Open Poetry #15 |
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Silence |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida
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![]() Silence ~*~ Silence haunts like a forsaken timepiece sleep eludes as the moon observes reflections of passion that dwell in dreams from under the bed memories search one seeking comfort fool that I am, I let them in too much to throw away thats why dreams haunt again and again ~*~ BloomingRose |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent! I love this, and the graphic, perfect! Maree ![]() "little miss understood |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- Ah, yes...I like this very much.. ![]() Wonderfully expressed, my friend.. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This likes me very much, Deb....well done! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - this is so well expressed, if only you knew how much I relate to your words. Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Maree~ Thank you so much. Vicky~ So glad you enjoyed. ![]() Decaflame~ I am glad this liked you, as you say. Melissa~ Many a dream haunts for those that have loved and lost. Thank you for your nice comment. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ The presentation of your thoughts is exquisite. Very nicely done. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
haunting dreams be gone new love is awaiting me to make new mem'ries Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice and I agree the images fit the poem well... nicely done! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ Thanks so much. Inspiration is blooming thanks to you! Interloper~ Thanks, and I like your poem as well. ![]() Cpat~ Thanks. ![]() |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Oh, this was very nicely done...very nicely done! ![]() |
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