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Open Poetry #16

Dry (in 20 or less) :)

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-20 10:56 PM

Dry

For a bleeding heart,
thankfully my blood is thick;
Love either wounds me
or consumes me
like some antagonistic tick.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-20 11:04 PM

WOW!! Gooooood one!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-20 11:08 PM

Good Job ..Topheth...enjoyed it

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-09-20 11:46 PM

Very nice!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-22 05:34 PM

very well done

I really like this one.....
felt it

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-09-22 06:31 PM

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2001-09-22 06:48 PM

Topeth~ I know where you're coming from sir....enjoyed it

Hugs,
~Krista

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2001-09-22 07:33 PM

Very tight and concise!

Yes, nature has a way of keeping us going, keeping us alive.

Cor

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-09-28 03:33 AM

LOL..this is an enlightener

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2001-09-28 10:06 AM

Very good.

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

10 posted 2001-09-28 10:45 AM

Cooool!

very good

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

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