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Open Poetry #16

Intertwine Serpentine

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2001-10-07 09:14 PM

Dancing alone to cryptic seranades
Undulating hips, flowing curves
Gentle strides, trod on firmament
Uncalculated twists, flowing hair
Alone in day-set
Fold and erect, sweeping embrace
Intertwine Serpentine
Heart beat pace, minds-eye closed
Only her and silent strings
Bending through rogue flats and sharps
Arms offer up unseen offering
Solidary Ritual
Undulating
Flowing
Intertwine Serpentine

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-10-08 09:28 AM

You know, I don't completely understand this poem, but it reads beautifully. I enjoyed the word usage.
Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-10-10 10:36 AM

This is very sensuous - I enjoyed! Thank you!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-10-10 11:39 PM

The words themselves seem to dance. I really liked the way this sounded when read.

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