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Open Poetry #16

Less Today

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-10-08 04:06 PM

Sorry, but I have to say,
I love you less today.

     (Now I don’t mean to hurt your heart,
      or have you wish your soul depart
      from this tragedy
      you think from me;

      So please, listen.
      There’s something missin’.
      Read beyond the sorrow...)

I do love you less today
than I’ll love you
come tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 10-08-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-08 04:21 PM

Less today...more tomorrow...

Yes!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-08 04:25 PM

If less is more, then I want less.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-10-08 05:56 PM

you gave my heart
quite the fright
but, just love me
love me less tonight
for when the morning
light peeks through
I know I'll have
more love from you.....

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

4 posted 2001-10-08 06:02 PM

Wow! You had me going for a moment. Whew!
Great write. Loved the ending.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-10-08 06:08 PM

Oh, Topheth, a bit of a teaser here. I loved it. Chris

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