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Open Poetry #16

Driving at twilight

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2001-10-19 09:45 AM

The world yawns and streches
once more
Like a dog when he is
ready for sleep
All things are done
and nothing is left
I drive through the dusk
On wings of steel I soar
I calm my soul in the
silence of the fields

paladin

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-19 09:51 AM

I am on of those people who love to drive and twilight is a time that for some reason I find very soothing. You capture it very well in few words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-10-19 10:00 AM

Well done Paladin! So nice to see you posting more often.
Love drives at twilight as well.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-10-19 10:33 AM

Love it!!!

Charisma

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-10-19 11:29 AM

your words are very peaceful to me...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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