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Open Poetry #16

Acrostic challenge....

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-18 11:04 PM

True Colors

They
react
understandably
envious
-
craving
our
love,
our
resplendent
souls.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-18-2001).]

Pip
Member

since 2001-09-14

Posts 59

1 posted 2001-09-18 11:06 PM

oooooo, I think I like this one the best so far, challenge-wise! Good good good job!

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-18 11:08 PM

Way to go...this is good.
alan

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-19 01:43 AM

huh? what?! oh yeah, the poem

sorry stuck looking at those eyes

the poem is great. I like acrostics. well done

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~LP~

Bilby
Junior Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 14
Northern Territory, Australia

4 posted 2001-09-19 01:48 AM

Neatly understated and well formed.
cheers,
Alan

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