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Open Poetry #16
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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
0 posted 2001-10-24 06:22 AM


I looked for
ALWAYS...
But only found
NEVER...

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!
© Copyright 2001 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2001-10-24 07:11 AM

If there is failure in this poem,
It is in the first line and those dots

I looked for
ALWAYS...
But only found
NEVER...

Perhaps a slight modification


I have looked for
ALWAYS...
But only found
…NEVER.

otherwise remove the dots
completely

Gloom
Alan
Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
2 posted 2001-10-24 08:23 AM

Kitty I liked this. Good job
NEVER...
give up looking for
...ALWAYS...
for one day it will be
...FOUND
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