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Open Poetry #16

I Would If I Could

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-24 09:01 AM

I Would If I Could

I would if I could
touch your eyes
with soft lips
kissing them
closed

I would if I could
touch your lips
with finger tips
tracing them
gently

I would if I could
touch your heart
with softness
given from
my heart

I would if I could
touch your soul
with sweetness
from spirit
freely

I would if I could
touch you now
with passion
heat wrapped
flowing

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-24 09:06 AM

awww....this is wonderful.....I like the would if I coulds very much

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-10-24 09:08 AM

Karen,
But you do, every word. *L*

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2001-10-24 10:48 AM

enjoy

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-10-24 10:50 AM

This is very good. I like it.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-10-24 03:47 PM

Oh yes how many time have I thought these same words...I would if I could...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-10-24 03:48 PM

Startime...you are writing so beautifully.
I am impressed.. This is superbly said.
Couldn't we all, if only we could.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-24 03:49 PM

Very nice Karen!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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