On Frozen Pond ........................... at it again!

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Open Poetry #16

On Frozen Pond ........................... at it again!

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-10-26 10:57 AM

On Frozen Pond
~~~

I climbed upon
the greenhouse roof
a drunken shortcut
makin'
The glass beneath me
shattered proof
of every step
I'd taken
~
I cut my knees
I scraped my shins
my pants
a ragged mess
A few more steps
I'll be across
this frozen pond
I guess
~
A mighty crash
but not a splash
the ice
gave way too soon
My belt hung up
upon a nail
I dangled
above the room
~
I wave my arms
I kick my legs
hey!
there's people under water!
And I'm not even
soaking wet
except
I relieved my bladder
~~~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-26 11:00 AM

O Great Grinning Gremlins....now I have to excuse myself!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-10-26 11:00 AM

I'm loving the humor this morning, Rex! Thank you for the smile my friend....but um...I think you'd better grab a mop!

(serenity exits, CAREFULLY...)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-10-26 11:08 AM

(giggles) Oh my, this is quite an amusing read! You got me giggling! (smiles) Excuse me!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Rex, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BSC

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4 posted 2001-10-26 11:11 AM

Hehehehehe ~ lovin' this one Rex ~ bringing lots of smiles my way... Thanks, Bonnie

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-26 01:56 PM

Rex, I thank you for my first laugh of the day....Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

6 posted 2001-10-26 02:48 PM

Rex - oooops!! little tinkle here from laughing. Good one. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-27 10:06 AM

OMG - now this was a great way to start the day at 7 in the morning, LOL, love your humor.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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