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Open Poetry #16

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-10-28 12:28 PM

A wild boar
was walking among humans

I exclaimed
"It's walking!"

Never get so affected
that all you do
is state the obvious

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-10-28 12:39 PM

Excellent advice, kaile!! Nicely done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-28 12:41 PM

*giggling* oh my what an interesting thought. But the obvious remains to be that this is a great poem. BRAVO.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-28 01:11 PM

Is this like the running of the bulls...alright state more then the obvious...what happened that wasn't so obvious...obviously some ran...James

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2001-10-28 10:37 PM

ROFL! you crack me up..!

interesting thought..keep 'em comin'..!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2001-10-28 11:40 PM

LOL. This was very short, but enough to have me rolling around on the floor laughing. Thanks for the laugh.

Dawn

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2001-11-24 11:11 AM

Haha Kaile, I could just imagine. Your mouth gaping wide, and your finger pointing at that wild boar... hahaha...

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