Sleeping -my first rictameter

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Open Poetry #16

Sleeping -my first rictameter

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-09-23 11:19 PM

sleeping
lounging of mind
resting of eyes and soul
keeping time at a stand-still for
renewal of energy and spirit
ready again to face it when
the eyes and soul awake
rousing of mind
sleeping

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-23 11:21 PM

SmittenKitten~
You cutie ... this is just adorable !
Way to go girlie ! PERFECT !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-23 11:25 PM

Krista, I love it! these are fun to do!! I hope you do more

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-09-23 11:41 PM

Marge~ Perfect? No no no

Hehe, thank you for your unending enthusiasm and encouragement

it is inspiration in itself.

SEA~ Thank you!

They are fun to do! I just might do another sometime soon

thanks for suggesting it!

Hugs to both of you!

And goodnight! My poem made me sleepy

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-09-27 12:00 PM

Krista-
   This is wonderful, my friend!
   You've got the rictameter thing figured out!
   Great job!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-09-27 12:23 PM

VickyChicky~ Thank you sweet friend

I must tell you, it was by looking at your poems and some others that I was able to figure this form out! So I learned from the best

*hugs*

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-27-2001).]

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