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Open Poetry #16

Hope

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-31 09:02 AM

Hope

I
see
so much
within words
that may not be real

what might you feel
for thoughts
written
beg
I

I
saw
flowing
across a page
with such tenderness

words of soft caress
fill my heart
lovingly
cry
I

I
get
to read
from your soul
poems filled with you

now open to my view
as feeling hope
for love
see
I

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-10-31 09:16 AM

Karen,
Well presented and written, enjoyed

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-10-31 09:42 AM

Nice style, Karen, and hopeful words for us all.
Sandra

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

3 posted 2001-10-31 10:05 AM

Karen; I don't really know how you do the poetry to look as it does. You even do it in design. WOW! I marvel..I enjoyed this poem on Hope. Good writing as always. Wanda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-10-31 12:55 PM

Lovely words...James

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