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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-11-04 10:06 PM

SOUNDS OF SILENCE

The crickets orchestrate an evening symphony
a distant lonesome call of a runaway train
Blue Jays shriek endlessly to worn those willfully
and friendly pattering of tin and heavy rain

A childs whispering that leads to happiness
all missing, shockingly, at a drop of a hat
when lovers passionate sigh of togetherness
form the sounds of silence, deafening as all that.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2001-11-04 10:11 PM

Love the sound of that!!

Nice visuals ctowen.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-04 10:11 PM

Craig, very well done!! Enjoyed this write much, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-04 10:12 PM

*sigh* absolutely perfect. I was able to hear every sound and then lost myself in the passionate sounds of lovers that silenced all else. BRAVO!!!! Very well done, Craig.

I love it, of course.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-11-04 10:16 PM

Cool sounds there. I like this, specially the last two lines

when lovers passionate sigh of togetherness
form the sounds of silence, deafening as all that.

That is a lovely sound indeed

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-11-04 10:18 PM

The sounds of lover's sighs drowning out all else...very nice imagery.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2001-11-05 10:22 PM

Blue S'
Nancy       -  Glad to share my imagery!!!
Midnitesun

Karen       -  Happy I could trap your
               passion long enough for
               you to be lost.

Tracey      -  There is no sound louder,
               comforting, or more shared.
               Yes, a lovely sound indeed!!
               I hear that !!!

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