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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-11-05 06:11 PM

FRIENDSHIP

F riendship is a vessel sailing the seas
R aging uncontrollable waves crest high
I ntriguing the cause of Life's stormy breeze
E ndeavors shaped by those who want to try
N ot one, but together, we chase the skies
D istant clouds not a problem for us to face
S ince we share common bonds, a thread that ties

F orever strung, holding life in its place
O blivious to those who can not share
R emembering only for Heaven's sake
E ndless dreams of loneliness we bare
V erifying the paths we choose and take
E veryone looks towards future skies
R aging against waves of coming good-byes

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-11-05 06:21 PM

ctowen~ A wonderful acrostic! You have expressed the magic of friendship beautifully.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-05 06:23 PM

Very well said.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-11-05 07:23 PM

WEll done CT..great read
alan

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-11-05 07:36 PM

this is great!
This is now my favorite acrostic! (SAVED

)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-05 07:39 PM

BRAVO!!!!A masterpiece. I love the whole way you put this sonnet together and how you have said it. BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2001-11-05 07:53 PM

beautiful acrostic CT...your words ring true and loud...this was just beautiful! what a wonderful testament to true friends

take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2001-11-05 08:10 PM

This is lovely, I thoroughly enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sinister Handed
Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 58

8 posted 2001-11-05 10:30 PM

Outstanding acrostic.
Very much enjoyed!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2001-11-05 10:33 PM

Thank You Everyone
for your comments !!

Midnitesun - I am honoured, and happy
             that you liked this one so ...
             when the idea came to me I
             knew I had to share it with
             everyone here at PASSIONS.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-11-05 10:40 PM

Friendship is a treasure. To be a friend no matter what and when you have to give one up...God, it hurts so bad....so bad...ok, this is...never mind, just sad.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2001-11-05 10:51 PM

Kay - I am sorry to have stirred such sadness
      not my intentions with this piece ...
      I was hoping for more of a guide to
      friendships at hand than those found
      sadly out of reach. If you find
      yourself at such a lost, just come
      here and seek me out. I will try to
      spring a smile or two just for you.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2001-11-06 09:19 AM

I like this very much... great acrostic! *S*

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