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My Torment
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My Torment |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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My Torment The gleam in your eyes, a trial Surpassed with a simple smile As warm as your kiss, Your touch A single spark lit to such The flame to the fire All consuming desire Awaiting the right moment For your kiss, your touch My torment The cries of a thousand souls Vanquised a way no one knows That is Except you and I And a love learning to fly |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
The cries of a thousand souls Vanquised a way no one knows That is Except you and I And a love learning to fly * * * * * yup.... I'd say this is beautiful.. Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yep...I must agree...this is very beautiful. Well penned, so full of passion. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
learning how to fly.....beautiful words, beautiful pen....  Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-10-2001).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you one and all ... Beauty is in the beholder. If you can feel it, then you all ready know what it is. Consider yourselves held!! Thank you!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ctowen, I'm so glad I found your poems The more I read of you the more I like. This is just beautiful.. I like I like  Hugs, Tara |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Craig! Your lovely words are always such a delight to read! I love it!!! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah yes, what torment, having to wait for that perfect kiss. I love this piece, it speaks volumes and cries out from the soul If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, some torment can lead to intense pleasure...or so I'm told! Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, this is quite a tormenting poem. I sure do know the feeling. Really good write. Sandra |
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