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Open Poetry #16

10 or Less????

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2001-09-29 07:46 PM

You touched
I felt
You left
I wept!

Does this qualify ??

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-09-29 07:47 PM

Well you do have 10 or less words...I'd say yeah this qualifies.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-29 07:51 PM

Oh my..Oh my...I do love this!!! Good one!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

3 posted 2001-09-30 09:20 AM

Most certainly, Kitty**. An encompassed idea within the work count.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-09-30 09:23 AM

I didn't know we were down to 10 or less..great job, says it well.
Sandra

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-09-30 12:47 PM

i read your words like i would a rap...

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

6 posted 2001-09-30 01:02 PM

Very powerful words for 10 or less....great job!
Cindi

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