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Open Poetry #16

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-30 05:19 PM

digging deep
spading a life
forced down

~*~

reaching in
latching onto
discarded heart

~*~

pulling out
extracting the yearn
seeking hope

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-30-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-30 05:46 PM

very well done!!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-09-30 07:37 PM

nakdthoughts - I had to read this several times before understanding your writing. But I now do. So hang in there, smile, and let go...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-30 07:39 PM

I love these! Very well done, hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-09-30 07:48 PM

I like these..I might have to lose some words just to try this..

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-10-01 07:03 AM

thank you all for your kind responses

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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