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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Faced with fears of fading faces The best and worst of times still clash My heart holds on My mind erases Each wave I ride will only crash Faced with fears of unknown places The highs and lows bring me to tears My broken hand Is out of aces I’m folding after 19 years |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very sad, but nicely done Kevin. Those aces will come to your healed hand soon. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Wow. I'm not sure how to respond to this. It's wonderful, but sure pulls at the heart strings. Lovely write.  [This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (edited 10-01-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I would rather see you unfolding. Please keep writing you have a nice flowing style. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Sad poem Kevin, but very well written. Nice to meet you also. Smiles, Marie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Hello, sweet poet~ Time to shuffle the deck and deal again~  Keep the aces up your sleeve~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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