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Open Poetry #16

Last dance

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2001-10-01 08:54 PM

You were the most popular girl in school
I could never see what you saw in me
My heart broke when you broke the dating rule
Other guys danced with you and you could never see
I wanted you to be free and did'nt say a word
All I asked was for the last dance to be with me
I loved you so much my happy little bird
I knew you might flirt but your heart belonged to me

This poem was inspired by Enchantress and the song "Save the last dance for me" by the Drifters.

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (edited 10-01-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-01 09:29 PM

Ah...how sweet Paladin.
I do wish you would write more of the 50's themes.
I was having so much fun the other day remembering...
Ah, nostalgia comes with autumn to visit me.
Enjoyed,  ~magical hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

2 posted 2001-10-01 09:35 PM

Very nice Paladin, enjoyed the memories.

Nice to meet you also.

Marie

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