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Open Poetry #16

Sarah

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-02 07:42 AM

Sarah

I tried to love you
but you didn't want
anything to do with that.
So I wanted to
be your friend
if you would just give
me half a chance.
You didn't even
blink an eye
when you left me
for another guy.
Nothing left to say
except Sarah goodbye.

JamesLee
October02
2001

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2001-10-02 08:12 AM

James,

You always relay SO much emotion with your words. *Hugs* to you. Wonderful write.

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-10-02 09:40 AM

One of the saddest truths...You just can't make someone love you. Still trying to learn that one myself. Lovely piece.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-10-02 09:56 AM

James,
Short and sweet, enjoyed

Sleepyhead
New Member

since 2001-09-21

Posts 6

4 posted 2001-10-02 10:33 AM

Very nice piece.

sleepy

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