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Open Poetry #17

Concept

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-12-01 03:12 AM

Concept

There is to life a plan and point;
Beyond any doubt a grand point.

From deep within comes goad divine;
Never it leads to our strand point.

Creeping sadness stronger will grow
Until released is our manned point.

All life in peace levels out clear
When we find and place our rand point.

There is not much we represent
Till we come to know our standpoint.

Let go, Zahaar, and stern realize
Our own way is but a bland point.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-01 05:55 PM

this is very interesting

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-01 07:00 PM

This is a poem that makes one really stop and think. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-01 08:17 PM

(sigh) Oh Erin, yes indeed, we all have a goal and dream we strive for, but the point also must be followed, and we must believe in ourselves to find joy in life's concept! (sigh) Very contemplative piece, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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