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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-12-10 02:45 PM

give me one more chance
take me back to yesterday
let me do it right

Inspired by: Take Me Back To Yesterday.............challenge

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-10 02:50 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo wonderful, sweet friend! I too wish I could go back to yesterday and experience one laugh for my childhood before moving on. (sigh) You always write the most gorgeous and fabulous senryus, I love them all!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-12-10 02:57 PM

beautiful!!!

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-12-10 02:58 PM

Permission granted!

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

4 posted 2001-12-10 02:59 PM

Very nice!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-12-10 03:06 PM

This is a lovely sentiment, unfortunately, there is no going back to do it right is there?

Enjoyed the read.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-12-10 03:40 PM

It's sad that we sometimes only get the first chance to do it right! Very well done!!!!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-12-10 04:54 PM

I would give you a kabillion chances

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

8 posted 2001-12-10 04:58 PM

So many of us would like to go back to yesterday. Well said. joyce

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-10 05:11 PM

*sigh* I would give you as many chances as you like. So gentle are your beseeching words. **hugs**

I love your poems.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-12-10 05:57 PM

enjoy

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