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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-12-10 11:44 PM

I Dreamed I Loved You
By: Noah Eaton
1/2/01

I saw you standing on the sea shore
Breathing the soothing sea breeze
You turned as you saw my shadow, and then your spirits soared
As you laughed with cheer, and reached for me

Two peas in a pod, ripened in the sunlight of loves passion
At last I hold you close to my heart
A spontaneous combustion of ecstacy sparks in me, filled of affection
I burst in tears, knowing I’ve finally found you, after searching so hard

Oh love, never again will we yearn to find each other
I am here for you, the wait is over
You and I cheer in felicity together as we hold each other
Devoted souls we are, finally together

I feel your soft warm skin as I touch your neck
You touch my face with your hand and drag your fingers down my lips
We lean in together to kiss each other, under this romantic tropical sunset
You lay me on the sand, I hold you close, kissing in the birth of loves wish

I can feel your warm breath caressing at my neck, as I look into your eyes
As I sigh knowing that we were complete together, at last
We make love to each other as our hearts melt into one under passions skies
Speaking words to each other, kissing each other, as we roll across the sand

I wake up, sad to see it was just another dream
Oh love, don’t worry, I will find you soon
It’s just a matter of time, just a little longer, before we meet
Just know that I’ve always loved you, and I will always love you

I dreamed I loved you…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-10-2001).]

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

1 posted 2001-12-11 12:48 PM

Sometimes it feels like just a dream.

This is beautiful!

I am many.

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

2 posted 2001-12-11 12:50 PM

Don't worry, your dream girl is on her way!
Great imagery and romance!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2001-12-11 02:15 PM

Beautiful images, Noah...
I hope you find her soon, and when you do...you MUST give her this poem.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2001-12-11 02:18 PM

I've found that there are few who write of love and passion as you Noah.

This is why. It's perfect.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-12-11 02:35 PM

Hey, Noah...

I truly enjoyed this poem... your use of imperfect rhyme, ironically, was just perfect.

  A lot of very descriptive emotions kept me reading, you portrayed the feelings very tangibly.  This is not easy to do in poetry.

I love how you focused on describing the actions, rather than the scenery.  It really did a lot of good for the poem.

"Two peas in a pod, ripened in the sunlight of love's passion."

I love that part... just superb.

Sooner or later, Noah, you'll find this person... I wish you luck...

~Allan

"I know it's nice to be known - It caresses your ego - but the society cost is terrible."
~Vangelis

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-12-11 03:00 PM

Noah, you must have volumes of love poetry stored within you, and all are beautiful, with vivid imagery.

emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

7 posted 2001-12-11 03:21 PM

Lord, I hope that tide comes in soon and cools you off, sweet poet!

Emily

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2001-12-11 03:58 PM

Hi sweetness!
Soon enough Ms. Right will come sweep you off your feet! She will be everything you've imagined and more! (hugs)

RP

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2001-12-12 07:26 PM

it always comes when you are not looking for it

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-12-12 09:37 PM

I'm hoping your dreams turn into the real thing...James

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2001-12-12 09:47 PM

Noah
Good things come to those who wait and I have no doubt that someone very special is out there for you. You have such a warm, endearing heart and a kind soul. This was so very beautiful. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2001-12-12 09:54 PM

Wonderfully romantic as usual Noah.
~Hugs to you sweetie, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-12-12 09:56 PM

Dreams really can come true. I hope yours does dear Noah. This is a lovely dream and deserves to become a reality

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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