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Empty Love
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Empty Love |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Empty Love Empty love sustains us all, As myriad, the tears shall fall… Generations begin within- A technicality of sin… Affection settled in better terms, Of reticent emotional words… Never up-play the state of hearts- Be contingent within honesty’s arts… Fragrant lies may hypnotize, As you lay worth where you will… For unconcerned, eyes much forlorn- Are due to tip the till… A society destined to fall- Empty love sustains us all… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Devina, this is so good. It's great to read your poetry again!!  |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
devina.... wonderful lines....I really loved them keep up the good work my friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful flow...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know it's always good to see you my friend. . . flowing very well here. . . it's like you never left. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! Straight to the library with this one, Excellent! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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