Open Poetry #17 |
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Everything Touched Is Gold |
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Ousiders Cattermole Junior Member
since 2001-11-02
Posts 27 |
In the snowiest little village - In the foliage by the woods, To the quaintest little passage - Is were the entrance stood. So pass the tulips in yellow - That bend amid a breeze, And cross the snowy ever - That catch the fallen leaves. For here you'll find a stream - To cross the autumn fold, For here you'll come to dream - "Everything touched is gold." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For here you'll find a stream - To cross the autumn fold, For here you'll come to dream - "Everything touched is gold." =============================== Lovely imagery and wonderful cadence... Welcome to Poetry Land...this is the first Ive read of yours..I look forward to seeing more of your work. ![]() You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and gorgeous, sweet Ousiders, your beautiful words of tranquility and nature fill your golden words! (smiles) I love it! All your words are pure gold, sweet friend, they're so beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely...perfect meter and rhyme!! Loved it. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH! This is perfection! Loved it much! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This touches me just right... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely beautiful. The vision you have woven is a delight to the senses. I love it. Gosh this is well done. Into my library it goes. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OC~ Very lovely cadence to this piece, combined with great imagery~ Enjoyed~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ousiders Cattermole- Oh..this is a beautiful little piece. ![]() Really enjoyed reading this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Siofra![]()
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
everything touched in the golden awe of Autumn. I love it! ![]() I am many. |
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