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Open Poetry #17
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mirror man
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0 posted 2001-12-29 01:14 AM


hi hi hi hi hi
hi hi hi hi hi
hi hi hi hi hi
hi hi

[This message has been edited by mirror man (12-30-2001 01:41 PM).]
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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-12-29 08:09 AM

I liked the rhythm,  but the only word I understood was a
Kethry

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mirror man
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2 posted 2001-12-30 01:42 PM

Kethry -- that one really stunk, so I put this one in its place.  Thanks.
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