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Once Removed (Twenty or Less) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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stripped I cry and peel another skin the one below the one before is much too thin "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (12-29-2001 09:29 PM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A painful process.....great expression! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - and it is all so very real... Nicely done, in twenty or less... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
1slicklady, I loved the layers to this one. good write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Helen, I nearly cried while reading this. Wow, very nicely done. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Helen, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to the pain you felt before, and I pray now a new hope and joy has emerged for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
helen, a intriguing read..i hope someday the personna will feel able to expose himself/herself rather than continue to peel off skins... |
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