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A Loud Clock Ticking .....obsession
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A Loud Clock Ticking .....obsession |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Truly, I am maddened now. My head a loud clock ticking... ashes fall from fingertips, cigarette--aflame, forgotten. passion smolders unremitting... (fascination of fixation...) choke-hold desire, unrelenting... how odd to call this state, elation. (repost--due to replay of emotions--heh) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
mmmmmmm very interesting. This poem took me to a place where my desires smolder for release only to fall on barren soil. Amazing poem with an interesting vision. Well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I must have missed this one the first time. This is wonderfully crafted, I loved "choke-hold desire, unrelenting..." Poignant, precise, and exellent. I enjoyed!  *Krista Knutson* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh serenity...I did enjoy this one! Much!! Going back for another read. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
ooooo, very nice -Dave |
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