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Open Poetry #17

Wished Upon A Star

Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-11-18 09:15 AM

Wished Upon A Star

Wished upon a star
sudden void became so black
all for naught indeed

Inspired by:
Entreat A Dead Source

Nan

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1 posted 2001-11-18 09:17 AM

Great response to a great piece of work...

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-18 03:07 PM

This poem is the perfect inspiration to his poem. You catch the sad feelings just right.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-18-2001).]

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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3 posted 2001-11-18 03:13 PM

you capture the sad feelings perfectly.
Peaches

Sven

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4 posted 2001-11-18 05:05 PM

indeed. . .

well done, you've captured the feelings here very well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2001-11-18 05:31 PM

Well said, perfect scene.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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6 posted 2001-11-18 05:40 PM

Ok....am I the dense one....seems that everyone
else has this all figured out....

Guess what...ME too...nicely said in such
a short expression...

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-11-30 02:16 PM

Well, it's still November, so I guess I'm not TOO late with a THANKS to everyone for reading!

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

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8 posted 2002-02-11 04:17 PM

aw this is neat, I like it! Im just sorry that im late replying to it!!!

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