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Open Poetry #17

Road

wornways
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-11-19 02:47 AM

Road

Ever there spanned the long wending road;
Stretching aloft a life mending road.

Expanses unknown stirred mighty goad,
Spurring ventures along trending road.

Drifting alone with great mental load
Lost on vastness of peace lending road.

Changing lands made for phasing abode
Beneath shifting skies of sending road.

Hopes found new form through steady erode
Of useless views from strength spending road.

Mid moving seasons wandering strode
Zahaar in learning on tending road.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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1 posted 2001-11-19 03:49 AM

I found this extremely interesting...and Zaahar? Enlighten me please? Enjoyed this much and found the repetition of the word "road" very effective--well done!

wornways
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-11-19 08:51 PM

ah, yes, Zahaar. um, if you would like, send me an email to [email protected], and i'll send you a detailed explanation of this form of poetry, called Ghazal. i've done some extensive research, so what i can send you is far more informative in the way of explaining form than what you'll find on the web.

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