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My Disguise
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My Disguise |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Rain pelts down on my sorrows, and hides my salted tears. Thunder echoes in the distance, to cover my sobbing convulsions. Lightning dashes through darkness, to help my red-eyed vision. The storm that explodes within is shielded by the blessings of mother nature without. She pitys my dying heart and so she sends me a disguise. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Awesome nature imagery! Abigail, this is very good. I like the positive twist you gave to that potentially frightening storm. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Like the idea of this. Nature as a disguise. Great write. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes..beautiful imagery. I can almost see you there shivering through it all. enjoyed.  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love storms, they give me a way to vent my feelings and awe me with their power. BRAVO! I like this poem very much. **Hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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