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Open Poetry #18

A Love Defined

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

0 posted 2002-01-20 12:04 PM

Not a rhetoric but a feeling
Not an emotion; a way of living
Not words but tears.

Love defined:
The slow intense look
The kind unspoken care
The immense pain at small hurt

The hand to catch tears
The smile of encouragement
Not just for a special One
But for every individual

Stroke the cheek
Hold the hand
Gently but surely
Reach the soul.

Love defined:
Not words, not feeling
Not emotions, not a lifestyle
Not being, but reaching

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

1 posted 2002-01-20 12:07 PM

This was very well written. And I would love to say that I loved it, but it brings me a pain that would take colors to explain.

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

2 posted 2002-01-20 12:11 PM

This I have written, not through the joys of love, but through burns and scars. I'm glad you appreciate this poem.

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

3 posted 2002-01-20 12:37 PM

I like yer style, indeed,

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-01-20 12:46 PM

Not emotions, not a lifestyle
Not being, but reaching

Those lines were my favorite~

Not everyone has the same definition,
but yours read much like my own.

I felt this and I thank you.

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