| Open Poetry #18 |
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Nocturne (haiku) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas
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Nocturne Owl flies – silent, swift – Something screams, something dying, Quiet winter woods. w.james beard, jr (c)2002 [This message has been edited by jwesley (01-02-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful haiku- careful, these are addictive There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sven![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
he's right. . . you can't do just one. . . excellent, a portrait in miniature. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ REALLY stunning imagery in this piece~ Just exactly what a Haiku is supposed to do, it did~ ![]() Thanks for sharing, my friend~ Happy New Year greetings to you~ *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oooohhhhhhh...I love this, I'm always so amazed by the beauty you put in your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i see the imagery well and shudder...nature can be so cruel at times, yes? |
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