Open Poetry #18 |
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The Brown Recliner, The Rocker and The Ottoman |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
*Please help me help this poem: The rain ticks, steady, On the window glass. I hear and visualize The spray plumed From the street Behind car tires As they roll on Through the gloom-lit Darkness. The warm drizzle Will turn cold, This Northeastern January night. A good night For a fire, To load on the wood, Hear it hiss, Watch it steam. Later, at the stroke Of minuit, the red Bricks glow orange, Then blacken, while In the flames' white Belly, their meal Crunches, shifting, And snaps and crackles. Shadows play On the ceiling; The room's edges Unseen in solid Black; yet,within The circle of light By the encased sun Cast rests the rug Before the hearth, The puffy old Brown recliner, The rocker And the ottoman. Let be this Rain-soddened Winter's eve. The firelight Glows to ease The mind, The fireside Heat guards The damp From our Bones. [This message has been edited by Ladyhawke (01-30-2002 06:30 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and the burn of the fire lights our passions while we embrace in front of the fire and let our desires lead the way....*sigh* I just couldn't help adding that part to the wonderful vision you created with your words. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And so the embers trace our skin In a firelight tryst Laced in scarlet ribbons Of passions eternal promise" (smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, your words are always such a pleasure to read! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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