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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-01-30 08:08 PM

Bored

Finger nails tapping
Eyes stare blankly into space
I watch time elapse

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (01-30-2002 08:11 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-01-30 08:11 PM

I know the feeling...
and you expressed it so well.
tap tap tapping~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-30 08:11 PM

(sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...I know that feeling! (kiss on cheek) As long as I have you, I could never be bored, for I love you so much! (kiss on cheek) Sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love you! You have such a beautiful heart, my Guinevere, thank you for sharing!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-30-2002 08:11 PM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-30 08:12 PM

OOPs I sure know this feeling. Very well said...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-01-30 08:12 PM

Well...at least you found something to do with the time! Cute, RP.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-30 08:13 PM

Good one sexy gal! Come help me dig out the snow if you're bored. LOL....

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-30 10:58 PM

Rose petal HI, didnt see you down here at the bottom, this is a "real" poem, I see so many people doing it, Never thought of writing about it tho..haha, Love your new picture.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-01-31 12:31 PM

Nice, have been there many time....

HEY NANCY~ I will, I'll come help...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-31 02:03 AM

RosePetal - please don't be bored. Write these poems that you create, and have thoughts of times to come, and things that might be...

BC

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-01-31 02:06 AM

RosePetal~
The imagery was concise~
Nice job~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2002-02-05 03:27 AM

RosePetal-
  Ah yes...been there, done that...have the
  chipped nails to prove it...LOL.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2002-02-05 04:25 AM

I too am a table top drummer...I could HEAR the impatience in this...

nice job!

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

12 posted 2002-02-05 06:05 AM

RosePetal,I have done this so many times.I can catch myself at work doing this,

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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