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Open Poetry #18

Please Don't Do This...

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-02-06 08:53 PM

Don't leave...
  I beg of you
I can't lose you...
  I love you too much
What's wrong...
  Please talk to me
You seem to be pulling away...
  Just please...
     Don't do this...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-02-06 09:23 PM

Hard to improve on an emotion so honestly expressed. You have taken a moment and captured the pain perfectly.
Please don't do this...says it all!

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-06 09:26 PM

Very sad and beautifully written.

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-06 09:26 PM

To the point!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-02-06 09:36 PM

You could not have said these feelings better
if you had written it ten different ways..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-02-06 09:43 PM

Skyfire - Your pain I can feel, it came through clear in this sad write. Wish you the best...

BC

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